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My dad is sad by ~Jinesay:iconJinesay:



You are so far of me, you will miss me forever
You made a hole in my life
I hope that you're somewhere better than this cruel life.
Somewhere that never anybody will hurt you
Somewhere, but I can not be with you.

I wish to hear your voice soon.
At night, I cry looking at the moon
I don't know where you are
and I don't remember who I am.

Without you it's so sad,
But I can not be with you,
It make me mad.
I would like to ask you why.

Why do you let me alone???
Why do you let me cry???
©2008-2009 ~Jinesay
:iconjinesay:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for my father, he miss me so much.

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:icondizzylemons:
This is really touching, congratulations on it.

"You made a hole in my life
I hope that you're somewhere better than this cruel life."

Its amazing how you can say both and still both come accross to be so sincere, I love it.

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There’s something about seeing this city at night
Where we can say what we want and do what we like.
These streets are empty but we don't feel alone,
We can run in the dark and sleep on the roads.
:iconjinesay:
Thank you, it takes me a long time to decide to put this on DA and now I know that I did the right thing.
Thank you so much for this comment.
:icondizzylemons:
Definately the right thing, if this poem is anything to go by you should never feel unconfident about what you upload here.

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There’s something about seeing this city at night
Where we can say what we want and do what we like.
These streets are empty but we don't feel alone,
We can run in the dark and sleep on the roads.

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